- Polysyndeton: “This is a valley of ashes – a fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges and hills and grotesque gardens; where ashes take the forms of houses and chimneys and rising smoke and, finally, with a transcendent effort, of men who move dimly and already crumbling through the powdery air” (Fitzgerald 23).
- Vernacular: “’He went to Oggsford College in England. You know Oggsford College” (Fitzgerald 72).
- Simile: “It had seemed as close as a star to the moon” (Fitzgerald 93).
- Alliteration: “His hand took hold of hers, and as she said something low in his ear he turned toward her with a rush of emotion” (Fitzgerald 96).
- Allusion: “It was when curiosity about Gatsby was at its highest that the lights in his house failed to go on one Saturday night – and, as obscurely as it had begun, his career as Trimalchio was over” (Fitzgerald 113).
In
The Great Gatsby, F. Scott Fitzgerald exemplifies his sophisticated style
through the many rhetorical strategies he uses in his text. He applies many
different strategies to highlight the ways that Nick is so different from the
people he surrounds himself with and how he likes to learn their ways. Through the polysyndeton used on page 23,
Fitzgerald explains how the rich people make their houses out of “ashes”
because though their houses are very nice, many of the people have been through
a lifetime of hurt and trouble. Fitzgerald hides these problems through his
flow of words in this specific sentence. The use of a simile, “It had seemed as
close as a star to the moon” (Fitzgerald 93), reflects the poetic style that
Fitzgerald often employs in the book. This poetry causes the reader to
indirectly reflect on the work and realize that Fitzgerald really takes time to
piece together his writing. This poetic style can also be shown through the
alliteration of “his hand took hold of hers” (96). When he repeats the letter
“h” he emphasizes the significance of how important this moment was, the time
when Gatsby and Daisy finally admit their love. His poetic style helps the
reader to relate to them on a deeper level. The flow of the work as a whole and
the educated diction allows for a tone that can be taken very seriously. The
writer appeals to the pathos of the readers by using this style to show them
that his story is credible. The extremely educated style is exemplified through
the many rhetorical devices used in the text. This allows the reader to relate
more easily to the characters and the points trying to be made throughout the
story.
Your idea that the Fitzgerald is referring to the houses of the wealthy when he speaks of the "valley of ashes" was completely brilliant- When Nick would talk about driving through the "Valley of Ashes" I had no idea what they were talking about and never realized that it could have represented that. That whole are of the book became way clearer now since I never even would have thought to interpret it in that way. Overall I was impressed that you could find so many different types of rhetorical strategies; I had trouble finding any at all. In the commentary parts of your essay, you used a lot of shorter sentences with few commas, and it may have been more clear if you had combined those sentences with the ones before or after them, but otherwise it was really good!
ReplyDeleteI like how you found so many complex rhetorical devices rather than just simile or metaphor. Addressing his flow of speech shows you know how to analyze polysyndeton accurately. Also noting that alliteration creates a poetic style reveals your ability to identify artistic writing. The analysis as a whole sounds a little generic, though, it is hard to break from the traditional essay form we study in class. Overall a very impressive insight, as Sarah stated earlier.
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